I miss you
I miss you and your warmth and all
The warmth that sheltered me and my wondering soul
I cannot fathom how we became what we are today
My tears filling my eyes I truly cannot see the sway
I have fallen once , hard have I fallen
With no hope to sanity I'll ever return
Like a child too scared to scream or break free
I cling to sweet memories like a creeper to a tree
O' I miss you now I miss you dear
My heart beats with hope the world can hear.
Does this sound good????POEM HELP!!!!?
It is very simple and nice....my heart missed a beat !!!
Reply:ya its nice
but something is miss'n
Reply:Yes, it sound very good, and very deep. I can relate to it, and maybe others can too. I truly honestly love it.
Reply:i really love this.
i can't say any more.
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