Do you like my poem?????????

I miss you and your warmth and all

The warmth that sheltered me and my wondering soul



I cannot fathom how we became what we are today

My tears filling my eyes I truly cannot see the sway



I have fallen once , hard have I fallen

With no hope to sanity I'll ever return



Like a child too scared to scream or break free

I cling to sweet memories like a creeper to a tree



O' I miss you now I miss you dear

My heart beats with hope the world can hear.

Do you like my poem?????????
that was amazing!!! great job!!!!!!!

keep it up! you have great talent :)



~Bella Swan %26lt;3333
Reply:wow thats an excellent poemm! your great at poetry keep it up
Reply:to be honest...it's mediocre. It's a little cheezy! Sorry! Hey...don't be discouraged you can only get better!
Reply:well. 2 be honest, i didnt really like it

im the kind of person who hates almost all poetry which attempts to rhyme words. this is because people in general end up going too far out of their way to make words rhyme and end up making it cheesy and having little meaning

also, your theme was a bit of a cliche to be honest. the amount of people who have said what you said then is outstanding. but a good poet does is convey the same theme but present it through a different way which not many have done before
Reply:i dont think its too cheezy at all, i think its cute. i suggest that if your good at coming up with melodies to make it into a song... i think it'd be a good one

=) god bless
Reply:it's different. I like all kinds of poetry.